She was wide on bathroom stairwell.
Painful slow in her decent.
Impatient from all the waiting.
She zigged, I zagged, and down she went.
I called for reinforcements
Had a piss but not too long.
Please come to Gus’s Taco.
And bring someone who is strong.
Dennis Mantin 
This piece has a raw, kinetic energy that leaps off the page. The rhythm is playful yet urgent, and I love how the short, punchy lines create a sense of motion—like we’re right there, navigating the chaos of the stairwell alongside the characters. The mix of humor, tension, and everyday absurdity gives it a vivid, almost cinematic quality.
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