I’d been searching for the answers… When finally she came along.
Preforming miracles, curing cancers. Giving music to the song.
She taught and gave directions. Even when I didn’t ask.
She let me know my fortune. In her sunshine I could bask.
She showed me all my foibles. And how little I evolved.
I felt criminally unworthy, so I left her. Mystery solved.
Dennis Mantin 
This is a beautifully introspective and evocative piece. Your words capture the awe, vulnerability, and self-reflection that come with encountering someone—or something—that profoundly changes your perspective.
I love the way you convey admiration and humility simultaneously. Lines like “Preforming miracles, curing cancers. Giving music to the song” and “She showed me all my foibles. And how little I evolved” strike with both lyrical beauty and emotional honesty. The contrast between the brilliance of her presence and your own sense of unworthiness adds depth and poignancy.
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