There is something in the water.
In the air like flakes of snow.
Take the narrow to the broader.
I’m just learning letting go.
You are cold, and you are distant.
It’s all tell now and no show.
If I were just more consistent.
I could teach this letting go.
There’s a moral to this story.
Builds a plot like mold will grow.
There’s no need to say you’re sorry.
You taught me well this letting go.
I am cold and I am distant.
I’m all tell now and no show.
You teach well, so persistent.
Such a gift this letting go.
Dennis Mantin 
There are some things I need to let go. Great poem!
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I am pleased with this. I appreciate the feedback.
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“I’m all tell now and no show”, another powerful line. What a gift!
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Honestly, I am quite pleased with this one.
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Yes, yes totally. I think there’s a list of them, that you should be pleased with.
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