The cure was street prescription.
Like the kind the Doctor sells.
A steady diet truth is fiction.
Deeper meanings hidden wells.
The chemist he retired.
Looked so old in prime of youth.
There was damages collateral.
Staying quiet supplants truth.
The cold went on forever-
A chill that rests on bone.
Where the mind it can be broken.
When the heart is that alone.
Relying here on strategies.
Warmer winds brought forth a thaw.
And just before the dam broke.
Was the worst I ever saw…
I was something if nothing andI lived past my prime.
I was sheltered in horror and witnessed some crime.
All meaning got lost when I went out to explore.
I was leaving and grieving. Not returning for more.
It’s all in the fortune and the luck of the draw.
I know it was real because I felt what I saw.
But I’ll leave it all there in a wave with a smirk.
I got quiet and aged and steeped long in work.
There’s more to the story and you know I’ll write.
I was sick of complaining and I was tired of fight.
NEW BOOK RELEASE!⁷
Look Them in the Eyes
Dennis Mantin. Friesen Press, 2023
There are thirty-two ways to write a story, and I’ve used every one, but there is only one plot—things are not as they seem.
Jim Thompson
Following the birth of his daughter, Jackie, middle-aged Zach MacIver is determined to stop what he terms “intergenerational transmission of family dysfunction” from plaguing his family. Over the course of two years, from the time Jackie is eight until she turns ten, Zach recounts his life experiences to her while attempting to navigate the obstacles created by her mother, Tina, who is experiencing her own version of intergenerational transmission of family dysfunction. The story begins during the COVID-19 pandemic when the world and its inhabitants face mounting daily trials and life-altering decisions. From there the narrative proceeds in a non-linear fashion as Zach recounts the roots of his own dysfunction and how his love for his daughter and his desire to be a good father forced him to face his difficulties head on. American author Jim Thompson once wrote, “There are thirty-two ways to write a story, and I’ve used every one, but there is only one plot—things are not as they seem.” This story is a great reminder of that.
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Book I wish I could read again for the first time!
Dennis Mantin’s clean characterisation breathes life into the narrative, the realistic portrayal adds to the reader’s understanding of the book’s profound messages on life and people. What’s compelling about the novel is the the Protagonist’s journey, his perspective on “intergenerational transmission of family dysfunction” and how he’s determined to stop that from plaguing his family. The story is neatly told from Zach’s( the protagonist) perspective. It’s a non linear narrative with characters virtually jumping off the page. The characters, their presentation and Mantin’s unique writing style offer readers a fresh and deep perspective.
—Anuradha Basu, Amazon, November 21, 2023
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