The Sunshine lit me up today
There was talk again of rain.
They were chatting about the weather.
I rolled my eyes again.
The fever overtook me.
Doc said, “You’re doing something right.”
If I stop listening to opinions.
The future might look bright.
Sunshine
Dennis Mantin 
This is a sharp, quietly uplifting piece. I love how you contrast everyday chatter with inner resolve—the eye-rolls, the fever, the doctor’s line—all leading to a hopeful, self-affirming turn. It feels reflective without being heavy, and the closing thought about tuning out opinions to see a brighter future lands with real clarity. Simple, smart, and resonant.
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